Score: 9

"Wow, that was better than I expected!"

submission: With My Mind's Madness

date: November 8, 2008

At first I thought It was just another crappy fan vid because of the rough animation style, but, boy, was I wrong! The song fit perfectly with what was going on in the flash, espicially the part with the zombies. Loved how you tyed in the demon dude, or whatever his name is, along with an army of soldiers, great action everywhere. But I'm going to have to agree with Joeairo- The ending wasn't quite as dramatic as I had hoped, but that doesn't matter, 'cause it was awesome!

Animation-9-A bit laggy here and there
Characters-10- straight from madness
Concept-10- Loved the "Alternate ending feel to it.
Overall-9- Nearly perfect!

Score: 10

"Almost as good as the first!"

submission: Charlie the Unicorn 2

date: November 7, 2008

This is down-right hilarious in every way! I watched the original Charlie about a year ago, or something like that, and I thought this was just another cheesy rip-off, but it was actually really good, and from the same artist! Sweet! Loved the blo-oo-loo-oo-loo tounge thing that they did, and ALL HAIL BANANA KING!

Animaion-10-Special effects were wonderful, walking style was classic
Characters-10-gotta love Charlie and the gang!
Concept-10- Where do you come up with such awesome ideas?
Overall-10- Made my day!

Score: 9

"AWESOME! Congrats on 2nd place and $1000 !"

submission: EW: Matt Sucks

date: November 7, 2008

Excellent flash. At first, I wasn't so sure, but by the time Matt fell on the bat that you thought was him, I was laughing. There are so many funny ideas like the "unstable stake machine gun" and when he walked outside and exploded, that was hilarious! Also liked the randomness of him eating that pile of garlic, who puts a pile of garlic in a chair? lol. Anyways, nice flash, and once again, congrats on 2nd place and $1000. I wish I had that kinda money...

Animation-9-very fluid and smooth
Characters-10-awesome and innovative.
Concept-10-hilarious ideas!
Overall-9- I definately see how this came in 2nd!

Score: 9

"Nice!"

submission: The Zookeeper

date: November 7, 2008

First off, congrats on making the front page. I think the cartoony style you used in this flash was very well done, and that you illustrated the characters quite well. There were a few minor flaws, such as the scene where it was a close up of the zookeepers hand throwing those little pellets, his hand was too tan, and I could barely see it, but other than the small stuff, it was great. Liked the vibrant colors used at the end, but why did the zookeper break all the cages? Who knows. lol. I also enjoyed the flying hat, which only added onto the cartoony feel. Now, it's not perfect, you understand, but who looks for perfection in flashes like these? Great Work.

Animation-9-smooth and fluid
Characters-8-a bit scketchy
Concept-10-Brilliant idea
Overall-9- Excellent work!

Score: 9

"Inspiring and influencening!"

submission: Radiohead - Creep

date: November 5, 2008

This music video emphazized the song perfectly, although the girl he liked was nowhere in the song whatsoever. but that cool, I don't mind. I liked how when the song built up, the details kept on being drawn and drawn until the guy jumed out the window( a bit weird btw...) and all the graphics faded away... this is a true video that shows the deepness of the song. I respect that you chose the acoustic version, but I think the vocals weren't exactly... fitting in with what you were trying to get at, they were a bit more enerjetic, or risky then the video showed it wanted to go, but hey, it's still a good vid.

Animation-10- visually stunning.
Audio-9-song was a bit risky in places
Concept-9-almost dead on music video
Overall-9-great flash!

Score: 9

"Wicked Awesome!"

submission: Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire

date: November 2, 2008

Nice work man! I liked the simplistic, yet complex style of drawing you did. If I were to make any suggestions, I would reccomend subtitles, because I couldn't really make out what the singer was saying during the song. The storyline was a bit confusing at first, but then after a while it all made sense. Plus, after a while I wasn't even listening to the song, just watching the vid to the song! =3 Anyways, I haven't really seen a happy vamp before, but now I guess I have!

Animation-10-VERY fluid, explosions= awesome
Character-10- Girl, vamp, and vamp hunters showed personality
Plot-9- It wasn't anything complex, but it put a smile on my face
Overall-9- Excellent work, my friend!

Score: 6

"Needs improvement."

submission: AYB: Sonic Adventure

date: November 2, 2008

Well, I see what you were trying to do, but it didn't quite work for me. First off, instead of them just standing on that big platform, you could go for an animation twist and draw Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles in the ship, and then Doctor Eggman, or maybe even shadow, could appear and then you could go into the song. For the song, Try to make all of the "All your base" signs a bit more real, because you could obviously tell they were fake. Other than that, good job!

-Animation-?- Can't give you animation score, because you did frames.
-Audio- 10- nothing wrong with the audio, but it did fade out before it ended
-Images- 4- Well, the all your base signs were obviously fake and the three pictures for the initial storyline weren't very creative, even if they were from an old game
-Overall-6-Definately needs improvement, but good idea.

ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US

Score: 8

"Haha!"

submission: TmsT's Zero Wing Rhapsody

date: November 2, 2008

Wow, I only thought you could do half of "Bohemian Rhapsody" due to the lack of dialougue in the game, but because of the repetitive nature of the lyrics, you managed to pull of the whole song! Animation was vary flowing, and the drawings were very well done. My favorite part was when Cats left with his head banging!
Awesome!

Animation-9-very fluid, a bit rough in the instrumental scene
Audio-8-loved the idea, but you simply repeated the lyrics a bit too much.
Concept-10-very good idea, loved your creativity
Overall-8-Nice job!

ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US.

Score: 7

"WAZZZZUUUUUUUUPPPPPPP!!!!???"

submission: Elian - Wazzup!!!

date: November 2, 2008

lol, this classic. I loved when they used this in Scary movie. The only thing wrong was, during the "All of them were saying wazzup" scene, it started to, I dunno, like, lag a bit, or something, and it didn't sound to good. But, the idea was hilarious, and that's what counts! Nice work.

Score: 9

"Oh... my... god..."

submission: Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)

date: November 2, 2008

Now, of course we all know that that is'nt going to happen any time soon, (I hope.) but it's just so scary, dude! I loved how you touched up the nuclear explosion scene. The primary radiation and the the shockwave, were VERY well detailed and drawn. The three scariest deaths I think are the close-up of the guy who is screaming, gets turned into a skeleton and then blown away, The people running through the streets, who catch on fire, then blow away, and the guy next to his car, who were toasted, then blown away. This flash was very deep, and thoughtful, but what happened to the guys that brought her there? Could someone help me out, here? Anyways, sorry about the mic problems, that must've sucked. I could barely make out what Sarah was saying towards the end, so now I now what you're talking about. Anyways, that was an overall awesome, yet scary, flash. Excellent work, my friend.

Animation-10- smooth and detailed.
Characters-9- there wasn't really anybody besides Sarah & troops.
Plot-10-dead on what would've happened in nuclear explosion.
Audio-8-Screams and etc. were good, but speech was lacking in quality
Overall-9-Only problem was voices. Fix those up, and you'll get a 10 from me!