Score: 9

"Randomness!"

submission: JimSpin

date: October 22, 2008

Hehehe... I liked the randomness of this flash, but whatever is it that he is spinning? aroundandaroundandaroundandaroundanda roundandaround... sorry, got a little hypnotized. lol. Why does he have nose!!!??? lol i dont rly care. Nice one dude!

Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: Jim: His Hidden Life

date: October 22, 2008

I sometimes go into my own imaginary world and fear what others may think, so I know how Jim feels. This was the episode where I got introduced to the gang and their personalities got opened up to me. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Jim- Main character, in love with the girl with pink hair that also has no pants.
Goth- in love with other goth girl, has a sort of split personality.
Bob- Sorta selfish, troublemaker, but innocent in the end.

Could you PM me a picture with all the characters, their names and a short bio or description? Thx in advance. Loved idea, and loved Jim with eyes. lol

Score: 10

"lol, I suck at Tetris..."

submission: Tetris Unleashed

date: October 22, 2008

I never got the message on my gameboy from the tetris gods that said I was was going to be the best at tetris... Although when it happened it was almost like something out of a fortune cookie! Yep, I bet for Jim it gets chilly in the winter, having no pants on, and stuff. Cool idea, Peter. With this 3rd episode that I have watched I am going to assume that the rest of Jimtopis is hilarious and put you on my favorate authors list! HALLELOUGHYA!

Score: 10

"LOL!"

submission: Vault

date: October 22, 2008

This is the 2nd Jimtopia cartoon I've ever watched and the series is turning out to be hilarious! It does seem nowadays, that if you so much as drop a Vault that's what is gonna happen! One time me and my buddy Keir were playing with some old soda bottles, and we made a diet coke and mentos bottle rocket! It was hilarious! Anyways, liked the song nintendo elevator music, but where did you get it? Nice flash and I hope that Jimtopia stays hilarious! If I were Jim, I would have no pants on too. ^_^

Score: 10

"Nice!"

submission: Stuck in the Desert

date: October 22, 2008

This was the first Jimtopia video I have ever watched, and I got to say, it set the bar pretty high! Brilliant idea, by the way with the broken radio. If a good song was playing that would be kinda nice, so I don't die of BOREDOM in the desert! ^_^ I liked the song too by "They might be giants" I forget, aren't they like a kids band? I dunno. Anyway- the animation style really worked for me, it was simple, but it got the job done, and the style of animation you used fot the comedy genre perfectly. Looking forward to the rest of the series, and I hope they're all just as good!

Score: 7

"Ok... a few suggestions..."

submission: Zombie Attack I

date: October 22, 2008

Not too bad for one of your first flashes, but if you are interested in doing this in the long term, like Joe Zombie-ish stuff, then there are a couple of things you might want to consider.

1- Get a couple of good artists together along with yourself, and work on a big project, either off of something else,(ex: Super Mario Bros. Z by: Alvin-Earthworm) or you could make your own stuff, like Joe Zombie.

2- Don't fight on just one slab of land! Have a zombie, for instance, throw the protaginist into another fighting zone, such as a jungle, or a military base. But whatever you do, change position at least once. If you don't do that, at least make the peice of land you're fighting on big, with random obstacles and boxes. (ex: Shock 2)

3- Get a plot! Instead of just mindless killing, (whicch is kinda cool, I must admit) get a plot such as- The zombie killer was captured by a zombie group, somehow managed to escape, an then wanted revenge on all zombies for the zombies killing his family or whatever.

4- Look around on Audio portal, PM some great artists(Evil-Dog,ParagonX9,etc) to see if you could use some of their work, and then you're flash sounds great, and you and the artists get props!

If you follow those guidelines, you should be "King of the Portal" in no time!

Score: 10

"YOU LIED! lol"

submission: Joe Zombie :: Episode 6

date: October 22, 2008

You said this was the conclusion! But, what do I care, it means another Joe Zombie movie!!!! YEA! I just gotta say dude, you hit this one OUT OF THE FREAKING PARK! Oh, man I don't even have a favorate part cause I love it all! But it was so suprising that the guy died! I didn't think he would! I loved the part where Joe was shootin missles at the heli's and when the person that barely escaped got eaten, that was hilarious! Dude, I am on the verge of insanity for waiting for the last one! If that is the last one... lol

Plot- 1,000,000
Character Design- loved how you introduced new characters. 10
animation-ngetting better every time! 10
Audio- Great screams/ voice acting! 10

Overall- 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ,000,000!

WICKED AWESOME DUDE!!!!!!!!!!111!!!

Score: 10

"So much understanding!"

submission: Joe Zombie :: Episode 5

date: October 22, 2008

I totally get it now! Altough, if the guy didn't spend all of his time on that speech, he could've killed him easily! ^_^ Anyways, that was AWESOME!
Plot- 10
Animation- 9
Character Design- 11 ^_^
sound- 9.5
Overall- 10

Can't wait till I see the next one!

Score: 10

"Woah!"

submission: Joe Zombie :: Episode 4a

date: October 22, 2008

Dang, for a zombie Joe sure is smart! I mean, he rugged that dude to blow when they came in! Loved the action and suspense. Gets an even bigger plot each episode!

Score: 10

"Awesome!"

submission: The 10 Second Collab

date: October 21, 2008

I espicially liked that collab. Excellent work by all of you. Liked the different animation styles, and the music was also hilarious and cool.